This
A poem by Joe Cottonwood
This
Quail Court
is a manicured plot
where dwells a schoolteacher
named Jane who this once
in the entire span of our lifetimes
I meet for a few minutes in her bungalow of
flamboyant art, orchids in pots.
Jane outlines my electrical task,
a new circuit plus a couple of floodlights,
and then with schoolteacher gaze
both merry and serious she asks
“Are you honest? Wonderful and all that?”
“Um… Yes.”
“Then here’s where I hide the house key.
Just leave a bill on the table. I’ll pay it because
I’m also honest and wonderful and all that.”
And I do. Next day. Alone.
And she does. By mail. Promptly.
And I love. All that.

About the Author:
Joe Cottonwood has repaired hundreds of houses to support his writing habit in the Santa Cruz Mountains of California. His latest book of poetry is Random Saints. He appreciates bushy eyebrows, big paws, and dog-eared pages.
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June 5, 2023 at 1:15 PM
A sequel begins to form.
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June 5, 2023 at 8:11 AM
Oh, Joe. This absolutely hit the mark for me. I can even picture her.
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June 5, 2023 at 8:02 AM
Wondrous and all that!
Loved it!! This is the power of poetry. In a few words I know Jane, her magnificent artistic house and the wonderful you.
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June 5, 2023 at 7:55 AM
Very evocative of the power of observation and simple forthright communication.
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