Cold Spring Park
A poem by Jane Attanucci
Cold Spring Park
I’m out the door
nearly every day,
something my mother
never did.
To leave the house
untended was, for her,
unthinkable.
So many children,
like the woman in the shoe.
Oldest daughter, I pushed the twins’
stroller round & round our suburban block.
Now I walk outside,
morning sky lying
still on the water,
leafless trees draped in plum blue
shadows & daylight chill.
My mother’s eyes never
glimpsed these fragile woods,
white pines high above the aqueduct,
fallen oaks along rambling paths.
Decades in her grave,
the steps she didn’t take
uncountable.
Yet she remains—
I carry her.

About the Author:
Jane Attanucci has published poems in a variety of journals including PoetryBreakfast, The Pittsburgh Poetry Review and Thrush Poetry Journal. Her first full collection, A River Within Spills Light, was released by Turning Point in the fall of 2021. She lives with her husband in Newton, Massachusetts.
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May 5, 2023 at 4:27 PM
Lovely descriptions and vivid images. A simple narrative that reveals much more than just what is told, and a poignant ending. Thank you, Jane.
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May 5, 2023 at 4:25 PM
Lovely descriptions and vivid images. Simple narrative that shows us much more than what it tells. Poignant ending. Thank you, Jane.
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May 5, 2023 at 1:14 PM
Love this Jane! It’s that perfect symmetry of form and function. The graphic/pic they chose is perfect, too! Congratulations!!! xo Marjorie
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May 5, 2023 at 7:14 AM
I find this piece exquisite. I thank you, Ms. Attanucci, for giving me a luminous start to my day.
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