A Riff on Fall
A poem by Judith Waller Carroll
A Riff on Fall
As in take the fall, fall between.
Fall by the wayside.
Fall into place. Fall in love.
Fall in line.
Fall into the wrong hands
Fall flat. Fall apart.
Fall as in the sound of the thud
last night when you took a misstep
on your way to the bathroom,
just missing my bedside table
and landing with only a lurid bruise,
all bones intact,
both of us grateful to wake up to this crisp
fall morning, the air scented with wood smoke,
one red-veined gold leaf after another
falling to the ground.

About the Author:
Judith Waller Carroll’s poems have been featured on Verse Daily and The Writer’s Almanac, published in numerous journals and anthologies, and nominated for the Pushcart Prize and Best of the Net. She is the author of two collections of poetry, Ordinary Splendor (MoonPath Press 2022) and What You Saw and Still Remember, a runner-up for the 2017 Main Street Rag Poetry Award. Her chapbook The Consolation of Roses, won the 2015 Astounding Beauty Ruffian Press Poetry Prize.
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September 7, 2024 at 2:58 PM
Nicely done, poet friend!
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September 6, 2024 at 3:47 PM
🍂A poem to fall for!
Fine Riff!
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September 6, 2024 at 12:11 PM
love this
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September 6, 2024 at 10:57 AM
So much meaning in one word. Depending of where you are in your life, Fall has so many meanings. And as it happens in the later years Fall is worrisome, feared and observed. I like the bridge you make between those years. A favorite short story by Raymond Carver, After The Denim, similar message in your poem, And yet, the fall brings lovely colors and smells that comfort us. We keep looking forward to the change of season, embracing it, not fearing it.
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September 6, 2024 at 10:16 AM
This one makes me feel the rusty orange and gold of Fall! Lovely!
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