Potential Poetry
A poem by Tricia McCallum
Potential Poetry
The sky. And the sky above that.
The exchange of unmentionables between mouths.
Other people’s shame.
My friend who said we never write about anything we can ever figure out.
For him, it always involves sadness.
For me, it’s a language I search for every day.
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The astonishing smell of a baby’s head.
Morning coffee perfectly doctored.
Clothes fresh from the line. Mark Knopfler’s ballads.
Billie Holiday’s heartbreaking struggle.
Anthony Bourdain’s too.
The sound of someone leaving who doesn’t want to be heard.
Other voices in other rooms.
The day I decided getting out of bed was a greater effort than I could summon.
The high school dance at St. Joe’s where I stood all night against the wall
pretending it didn’t matter.
The time in Grade Six when Sister Benedict asked us what we wanted to be
and I said poet
and they all laughed.

About the Author:
Tricia McCallum is a Glasgow-born Canadian, a Huffington Post Blogger, a Pushcart Prize nominee, and Best of the Net winner. She has two poetry collections in print: The Music of Leaving (Demeter Press 2014) and Nothing Gold Can Stay: A Mother and Father Remembered (2011). She publishes her prose and poetry online and wherever she can find good homes, blogging about women’s rights, mental health, wretched jobs she’s had (and they are legion), and even more wretched blind dates (also legion).
She writes about almost anything: falcons in Ireland, elephants being traipsed through the Queen’s Midtown Tunnel, stray island dogs, beleaguered mothers, small town beauty queens, and ill-mannered neurosurgeons. Underlying it all is her curiosity about how people navigate their lives and what it is they struggle with under the surface.
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September 12, 2024 at 4:56 PM
Tricia, always love your words and flow
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September 10, 2024 at 12:07 PM
Wonderful poem, and great prompts as well. Thanks, Tricia.
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September 10, 2024 at 10:09 AM
I love the concept of potential poetry, and how the poet realizes it here: memorializing the mundane, the universal and the very particular personal in a way that makes all these moments sacred.
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September 10, 2024 at 8:34 AM
I like this poem because it is relatable in a way easy to understand. It covers a lot of ground, illustrates despair and observations of the human condition from someone who cares. Well done.
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